great poem!

I really liked that. you got talent.keep writing

hey great poem... 5/5!

Thanks for commenting on my poem... but unfortunately i know that if i tell my mom about my dad, he would just beat me more and probably do the same to her, so it's best i keep my mouth shut
Much love ~ Tina

Yolande, I know I've said this before, but this is an awsome poem and I wish I could be with you and talk to you.

Love always,
Ash