Excellent girl,
Most of thr time poems in that form aren't very good, but yours was great.
~anne~

I liked this poem! 5! Keep writing! :)

Great poem.. I like this one a lot! I voted a 5.. Keep it up.. Please check out my poems, it would mean a lot to me.. thanks

Honey you are one he** of a writer

Great Job Leah Lovly cant wait to read more

Amazing, just amazing, I am at a lose of words. This poem is beautiful. Splendid writing, however there are a few spelling errors but I wouldn't count it against you.

I would have to say this is my favorite part:

"Lost and hopeless
Is the tale
All senses begin to fail
Wait and see if miracle prevails
In the city of unrest"

Such beauty is sad words, so much emotion and sadness. Wonderfully written.

5/5, West