I loved the ending!!!

Love you
Heather
ps 5

Wow......spine tingling! Great poem! Keep it up!
xxxxx

Wow, it's so beautiful. It's absolutely beautiful. 5/5

I loved this poem. Good work! >3jess

i prefer poems that rhyme, but i have loved all of ur poems that i have read, good job. XoXunseentears

wow...amazing!!!! i love when you say

"Her black heavy wings,
Were once white and uplifting,
Slowly they sunk down to the floor,
As each feather fell one by one,"

...absolutely beautiful!!! keep it up!
-xXx-

Oh wow! I wasn't expecting that ending (maybe because I read the title as "Fatherless angel" LOL)

It made much more sense when I read the title correctly! I liked the progression you took us through and the outcome was totally unexpected!

Very good job!

i loved this poem 5/5!

cool... different.

i'm just adding a comment to know that after this one and roni's they will all be comments for the revised version of this poem since there are big differences between the two.

Great job beautifully written keep up the good work

Very good. An editor can really help. But you kind of said that already.

GOOD WORK!

Wow awsome write! 5/5