WOW......I really like that its interesting or however you spell that word. keep up the work

thankyou so much

Wow... That's amazing!!! Well done! It was really sad though as well...:(. Well done, kepp smiling... Elle x

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no not at all thanks

beautiful.....it was really sad, but at the same time happy, at the ending anyway.....great work =), keep it up ~much love~ i seen you were from indiana too, which part?? if you dont mind me asking.....you should email me sometime or im me, my yahoo sn is xxlostxmyxangelxx and my AIM sn is FakingThisLove take care of yourself, hope to talk to you soon =)

-brittnay-

wow a really great poem. thanx for commentin on mine xxx

great poem i look forward to reading more of your work. 5/5

~!~Noelle~!~

poof. i wish that happened to me. only my mom doesn't get beat, i dont' get beat, i get "hit" as they like to say. well, yay, i guess

5/5 awesome poem. Really loved it.

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that was sooooooooo gooood

Is that true ?????

no matter what it will a terrible thing to go through
then the best to have a friend

Wow... That's amazing!!! Well done! It was really sad though as well... plz read my poems and comment tham to plz

Great poem i wish that would happen to me that would help a lot 5/5