i loved it, really interesting and different--to the point wish is great keep it up!!
Courtney

Wow, this poem is so good! Very well written. Keep it up.

Love,
Tiff

It's like your imprissioned in a living hell that'll never end. Great poem. You can get through it. >3jess

awww wow...that was just...so deep and moving...wow...im like..speechless pretty much...that was amazing...new fav <33...beautiful write hunnie...<3 im gonna add ur new acc and delete this one off my favs cos i dun got enough room for the two...love you loads and i hope you're ok...:( xxxxx <33

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

awesome!! great write. yet very sad!! 5/5! u are very talented!! please comment on my poems!!!
.:.*F0rG0tT3N~N080dY*.:.

thats such a sad story *hugs* you're such a talented writer, keep it up! such a beautifuly written piece. :)
Lmay xXx

:( that is so sad...
I can relate about the starving...
5/5

thats brilliant hun . . .im speechless it deserves to be rated much higer than 5/5 i would give it 100/5 if i could . . it was really moving and so emotional it is brilliant luv ya jen x x x take care x x x

wow...it was so good it made me speechless, and trust me that doesn't happen very often
*Jordan Paige*

awwww that is so good very deep and emotional hold on tight, don't let go... stay strong
much luv, Mandie

:'( im so sorry, the poem was beautiful, and i felt your pain.. hope your alright hun. hang in there.

*^*hey that was a great poem...i understand exactly wut ur going through...been there done that...and i knwo how to get away..im me and ill try to help u if u still need it...much hope*^*

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I can see that you wrote this January the 1st...That was exactly the one year day for me too, when I was in the hospital...Scary...I understand your pain, I really do....Amazing poem

Hugs Sabrina

Wow, this is amazingly beautiful! Keep up the good work -XOXO-

Put in an excellent way dude keep it up and dont do it cuz ur talented to

Nice poemmm...rellly good 5-5