Intriuging, it seems like you keep mixing styles, but it's hardly even noticeable, it flows in between them....I don't know how to describe it.

I already voted/commented under the name "Likuid Pain"...lol...I'll stick to what I said earlier.

A lot of people seem to not understand this poem, but i understood it in my own way. I really like the way this poem is made for anyone to read and people can understand it in their own way, that's great. Keep writing, take care.
Satuxxa
p.s I forgot to say, also very original poem.

this one i didnt quite get, so i had to give you a 4 instead of a 5, but if i did understand it i think it wouldve deserved a 5... keep em coming!!
amanda