Comments : Dear Diary...

  • 18 years ago

    by rachel

    wow fantastic poem, ur full of talent keep writin and stay strong xxx 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by fallen angel

    i love this poem. its got emotion in it. i love to see true emotion in a poem, and you did it, well done xx

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    That was wonderfully done. I can totally identify with your poem. I write in my diary all the time, it helps me get a lot of my feelings out. Keep writing!
    ><> Kiesha

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    the rhyming pattern is a bit off in places...and personally i think dear diary is written too many times....and when i read a poem i dont like to expect what is going to happen....but thats me....4/5 nice idea though...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Your emotion was so clear .Words just seemed to fall into place. I can almost feel your sadness . Great piece of work !

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Hey..Even though you don't like what my msn addy is.. I rekon this peom is really good ..I really like the ending part! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    This is a touching well written poem, I'm so glad I read this. I found the repetition and rhyming to be really effective, and the emotion well expressed.
    Well done, 5/5
    *VioletRaven*

  • 17 years ago

    by xxMagioxx

    Awesome poem, I love it a lot, though I don't have a diary, I can see myself in your poem.

    Its really great

    Tony

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Strange coming on to find a poem, with the same title, and almost the same idea. That's great! I give you ownership because you were the first. Although, both our poems have different identities, but great job thinking of the idea, you beat me to it.

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wow what a poem! loved it!
    *5/5* definately!!!
    Mandie