by Lost Girl
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Creepy, i like it! |
by Just Lucy
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ohhh katie!, that is so sad, im always here for you ok, im at blue_kittykat_@hotmail.com ok, but another brilliant poem, you just type and instantly know what to type, its all from your hearT, your heart that deserves bettter, for deep inside is where it matters most, and katie, don't worry |
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AMAZINGLY written, so may perfect words!!! I love it, believe in your talent and belive in yourself!!! I care for you...Don't you forget!!! |
by hussain
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Am kinda speechless too..such a deep poem.......one that i hope is fictionalised. |
by Carmen
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wow... that one was kinda scary, but it was a good poem! i gave it a 5... great job! |
by SweetDreamer
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Wow, it really gives a in depth description of what goes through your mind when you feel so down. It kept my attention.:). Nice work! and thx for the comments on mine. |
by cac123
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so deeply beautifull. i just absolutley loved this poem. I love love loved this one. Omg im so in love with it haha you are an amazing writer!! |
by rachel
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this is reli amazin, scary bt reli beautiful and movin 1 of my fave poems of urs so far. keep writin ur mre than appreciated |
by Amanda
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Hey was very good poem from you. Very scary indeed! Keep it up! :) |
by erotema
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well done. i really enjoyed reading your poetry. it is very easy to read, and you create such vivid images. keep up the good work. |
by otto
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5/5 that wa a really really really good poem, i liked everything about it, ur an amazeing writting keep it up |
by Nici
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Again I feel an equal balance of reality and fantasy, with the descriptive language taht you used in this poem. Well written. |
by shakenangel
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ur darker poems are really really good. "my swelling insanity", that is just so powerful. it blew me away. |
by Mandy Lou
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Scary but great...5/5! |