This is a great poem. Keep it up.

hun, i hope that this isnt true for you and you just cant get into writing anything besides depressed poems... no one should be this hurt... sounds close to how i feel sometimes... hun, like i said if you ever need to talk im me...
keep up the great writing
much love
amanda

I really love this poem. It's beautiful-it's so deep and stirring. It reminds me of the feeling I have after I read a really good book. Great job-this is awesome writing.