Nice write, Martin. very well expressed, good poem.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

hey i like the way your poem flows its very good and im very impressed you tell what you feel well
comment back if you want
and check out my poems

Your welcome, i am glad people are commenting!
Anyone who comments here, i will eventually get around to looking at their poems too! =)
Thankyou to all that commented and voted!

Wow excellent. I love the ending... Really made me smile ^_^

Love,
X_Tawny_X