Wow....this brought back so many memories, I loved going to the park! I still do, it's just not as peaceful as I remember it! I really enjoyed this, especially the part about the hot slide! It didn't matter if I knew it was hot, I'd still slide again! That was the life! Great job, and thanx for the comment, I appreciate it loads~Holly
Beautiful.............simply beautifful, you are so very talented, I felt like a child running through the playground while I read this, so i read it a few times, just to feel that feeling......I would be honored if you could check out a few of mine, they go from sad, to ditty, and almost everything in between, I usually write more dedication style, please let me know what you think.....great job, off to read some more of your work...love ya becky
BEAUTIFUL!!! wow this may be such a girl thing to say but those last lines almost made me cry:) I wish i could go back, life was so easy and simple! Anyway you really brought this poem to life, very descriptive and flowed amazingly!!! Loved it!5
You made me think of when i was little, even though im still only 15, but it makes me want to go on one of those spiney things and be yonug again, when nothing else matterd.
You are so talented.. It was such a good poem. I really enjoyed reading it