Nice poem indeed! Loved the ending...but it says wroMg ...eh, jus a lil typo, you meant wroNg , I know lol...take care hun and thanx for the comment -5/5

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The Heart That Touches Yours,
Heather Michelle Craig
<333 Shauns Forever <333

Nice poem indeed! Loved the ending...but it says wroMg ...eh, jus a lil typo, you meant wroNg , I know lol...take care hun and thanx for the comment -5/5

~¤´¨)
¸.·´ ¸.·´¨)
(¸.·´ (¸.·´`·-----~> God Bless
The Heart That Touches Yours,
Heather Michelle Craig
<333 Shauns Forever <333

You did ok next one will be better

great poem! i love it! so true and so sad! keep it up!

Love, Taylor