Excellent poem, Kristyn. Beautiful and expressive write.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

this is a very good poem my foster parents say they dont want me to see my boyfriend and his mom says the same thing about me and one day the police were called but we still see each other and love each other i think that they dont want us 2 gether cuz he is black and im white.

aw omg well dont ever let them brake you too up!

Aww, that was really sweet. I wish you both the best of luck... keep in there, babe, and keep your head high. Good luck, hon, great poem!
Car

Thanx! It means a lot...honestly!
much love

Just have a chat with your mum and dad and explain that you are growing up and need to make decisions sometimes. See if that works, then explain why he is a good person so they know he doesn't just want to use you. They could be worried about that. Great poem though :) p.s could you check out my new poem i love......

I meant i like.....

wow! that was so awesome! great poem. 5/5

I AM ALWAYS MORE INTERESTED IT WHAT THE HEART SAYS THAN THE MIND OR INTELECT. THIS IS SLANG SO I WON'T
COUNT OF FOR GRAMMER ERRORS other critics may the poem is heart warming 5
if you want to hone the poem here are my sugjestions
I thank God for your presence

And you're always the last

OMG I love that poem. It was really beautiful. Parents don't always approve of love, but Im hoping they will realize that you cant go against your heart. I hope things work out. Take care.
Lia Jnell

i have one word...beautiful..

What a pretty poem!!! But ya I think that there is no age for luv cuz I once too fell in luv w/someone older than me
5/5.

this is really sweet.. i like it

amazing.. i loved it! a 5/5

Good Like it, very creative keep writing!

This is so sad.. your poem sends a beatiful message that many can relate to, it kind of reminds me of a Romeo Juliet thing.
Wonderfully done,
thanks for the comment!!
5/5
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always,
cate

Hey again!! Another good poem!!! Parents just don't understand sometimes. It sucks. I'm glad you are happy though! How old is this guy anyway?

Very well done! Exellent flow! You could feel the love you feel in this poem. You can't help who you fall in love with. Parents always think the person is the wrong one! It's to bad things didn't work out! Great work! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~