awww i like that..Thats what is like what just happend 2 me and my ex only after he said lets take a break he got 2gether with a girl he just met monday.but i liked your poem it wasnt bad at all..good job

yeah thats the same thing my ex did... he was telling me he still wanted to be with me then the next day asked someone else out. and thanx for commenting

Thanx

:OWow!!! I loved the emotions, very creative!! Amazing Work! You shall keep on writing!! God Bless! *5/5*

*~*Sedusha*~*
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great poem! i love it! really sadistic and depressing! but i can relate so well! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

wow that was deep and intense, but i like it, i like it alot

great poem! i love it! so sad but so easy to relate to! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

Wow... you're so talented... great job! You're going onto my favorites list sweety!

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This almost made me cry, it was so good though. 5/5