Wow where do I even begin? This masterpiece that you have here is truly touching.

I am left with my emotions reeling in many different directions. While I look at my own children and selfishly admit that I am glad I have not had to face such a challenge.

Your writing on this piece should serve as an insperation to everyone. A reminder to parents not to take each day for granted that they have with their children, and a reminder to those facing death that eternal peace is near.

The little boy that you wrote about left our world with so much love and hope. Love for those around him, and hope to be able to take care of them.

Great Job!

Sorry for the essay, but you have truly touched me with the few words you wrote. Excellent...

Now someone, please pass the tissue

--Sher

thanks for your comments....

beautiful and touching, well written i am moved yet speechless 5>>>>>>>>>>>

As she held his tight
He watched her fade
Into the light

was it meant to be

'as she held him tight' ?

it was a a truly moving and beautiful poem about somthing so sad.
take care

that was so great! it was very sad, and you expressed your emotions very well. 5/5

it is "he took he her hand as she held his tight" she is holding his hand...

Well written and very emotional.

It's not really about anyone....just a poem dedicated to those who suffer from cancer

hey, the abnormality I am referring to in that poem is Anorexia. as stated in the other poems.. I was just meaningI want to be "normal" like as opposed to what I am now .lol...
anyway ya just thought i would clear that up
thanks for the comments :))

Great poem! I vorted a 5! keep it up =)

OMG!.. that was really good.. im like crying! its really sad too GOOD JOB

Hello, my dad has cancer and i think this poem is really good. You have so much talent i love your poem. From emily x

WOW!!! you can write soo gud!!! this made me cry!!! I'm 14 and my bestie is fighting 4 her life because of cancer... it's really hard watching her drift away... take care Sarah XoX

that was an amzing poem, my uncle died of cancer and so did my best friends little sis, it was so well written. thanks for commenting on mine, keep it up xxx