I'm so glad that you left him, you deserve the best =0) And sorry for your bad experience with him!!! Great poem, though it's old!!!

*Love Sabrina*

Excellent write, Amanda. very well done~
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

That was really good Amanda! It was a bit of rubbish at all! I'm glad you left him.. you don't deserve someone like him! (",)

~Krissy

awww i liked this one!!! its good how it turns around in the end and i liked howu described most people's fearsa bout relationships. thanks for ur comment on freebird emans so much!
take care
xxxLoUxxx

i really enjoyed reading it and it does give out the feelings and emotions that were you were going through. Hope everythings ok for you now !

take care

Sorry it is pretty confusing..... :(

Amanda, Another beautifu and meaningful poem. You don't deserve anyone like he was, none of us do. They need to be all by themselves. This one touches the heart. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

I know how you felt in the first part. I always feel like that before I even start to talk to someone. Its a good poem. keep up the goodness in the workness.

this was real choppy and the whole thing was hard to read but the message in it was good if you revised it and cut down alot of words this would be very good just a suggestion

hey Amanda....Sorry I wasn't online yesterday, had a very frustrating day!!! Hope that you tooth is better =0) Well, hope that we get the cahnce to talk soon =0)

*hugs Sabrina*

Wow thats a GReat poem!...i loved it...you should check out my poems sometime

I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

very good keep it up