awesome poem. brittany is right. a lot of people probably can relate to this one...becuase i can too! very nice job. xo-kelleigh

Hey, this is amazing!! keep on writing and take care...very good~
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Wow a great right. Some great ideas and it flows really well. well done!

Jemma

That was really good. I can relate to your poems... First loves are so hard

This is amazing. i can relate to it and the whole concept of the poem is very clever. ^_^