good poem sounds like this girl i once knew but yeah u should rate mine it sucks but im still working on 'em lol

excellent write, i love it!

brilliant loved it

..-Morana aka Ice Queen
this bit sounds really interesting can u tell me does it mean anything in particular? it s great poem how all the words just fit tgh luv sam xox

Pretty Poem.

Failed

that was really touching. it drew me in. keep writing! thanks for the comment on my poem