Comments : Paralell Lines

  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    omg this is so good why has no one commented?? COME ON PEOPLE COMMENT lol
    but seriously this is great, and very sad...especially these lines got to me:
    "and all the times I could not cry they were my tears."
    "I cannot save my self from me"
    and no one has voted either...jeez...I give it a 5/5 for sure! it might help if you made a request for comments/votes on the discussion board. thats pretty much how i made myself know, and commenting on other peoples work who say they'll return the favor..just a suggestion. good luck! and again great poem I'll be sure to read more but for now I'm goin to bed cause I'm soooo tired lol
    thank you so much for your comment on mine!
    xxxChristinaxxx
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