Comments : A Child's Pain

  • 18 years ago

    by Amit

    Wonderful piece of work Ann. Amazing flow of rhyme in lines. very well written.
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 18 years ago

    by HJ

    Wonderful heartfelt and honest piece..So much visionary passion.

    I look forward to reading more, thank you for your kind words on my 'secret love'

    Kisses
    Hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Oh that really touched me! I loved it! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Oh Ann I love it!! It is hard! My mom left my Dad and move our of state....so I didn't see him much...It sucks....I know how that little girls feels, but she will be ok....It works....Such a sweet write!! 5/5 :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Forever29

    Excellent poem. Touching story as well. 5!

  • 18 years ago

    by HottChic

    Great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Jeff

    I stood up and applaused you though you couldn't see me or hear me.I loved the message Ann...You just touched my heart.Jeff

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    once again, very well written Ann, beautiful -5

    LOVE
    HEATHER

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Very touching Ann. Love is the key.... give her all you can give!!!!! Beautiful write....

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by chloe

    that was great, really expressive! great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammy

    Very heartfelt poem Ann... I love reading your work. You always do an awesome job expressing everything. divorce is not a good thing and the children always seem to get hurt more than the adults. I just wish more people would try to work things out and think more about the percious children involved. You have a wonderful heart Ann.
    Take care and God bless you and your family always!

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Wonderful:) I just love your poems.