wow this is an amazing poem
i dont see anything thats can be edited it flowed beautifully.

Take Care ! All the best !

This is definately your best, wow.....A beautiful love poem, so amazing Amanda...I REALLY REALLY love it!!!

very well written, with a lott of feelings to it.

Beautiful job, and that day will come when you meet that special someone. It will happen. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

wonderful poem~!!!!!!!!!!~

Very good:) I really liked it. Keep it up, girl! By the way, I like your name Amanda...it's sounds so familiar:) You must be really beautiful with a name like that ;)