Oh wow, Paul! This entire poem is so mesmerizing and completely enchanting! Your emotions flow spectacularly throughout this! These few lines just put me in a state of awe!

"Flowers that bloom and cry your name
Whispering winds after the falling rain"

"Hold my hand and see me melt with your eyes"

This is one of your best in my opinion! Keep to it~Holly

David,

Another GORGEOUS love poem by you but I can have no lower expectations =D Well, I don't know if you just added your pic or what but you're great looking for your age and talented too , seemingly with this sweet, sensitive, caring soul and yet, there's no girls lining up...I'm astonished! GREAT GREAT GREAT as always, hun 5/5

Love
Heather

ps keep in touch!
I've missed you!