Thanks to those that give me a title suggestion, and comment. ill try to return the favor!

yeah, Broken Life don't sound too intricate nor a bad idea, but n e how, great poem hunz! 5/5

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Heather

you surely have an amazing talent and i hope you continue to write..amazing

Nice poem, very well written. Keep writing!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Good Read.

Failed

Very good poem I can somewhat relate!

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