Hey! this poem is really good, but know everyoen on this site will never judge you! you can talk to us! keep ur head up and keep writing
Sam

Writing always helps get things out when it's hard to talk about! U will find u have a lot of people who care things will get better. Life has a lot of ups and downs! Sometimes it seems that everything is wrong but I have learned it does get better! I have learned to deal with life. I hope u will do the same! E-mail me anytime if u ever want to talk. Another great poem! Take Care of yourself! Brooke

well done, this is a really good poem, I hope you pull through, keep it up

The flow gets a bit dodgy here and there...but generally a good poem. I think this one sounds quite good because it was obviously written in the heat of a moment when you were in this mood. I suggest that when you want to write poems, you should do them at time like this...they sound good. x

HEy keep Your head up and it will all work out.

-Sean

i like this poem it is really good....you have a talent :)

-Amanda

that was beautifully sad...im sorry you feel like this, but like sam said no one will judge you on this site... so write away and write whatever4 ur feeling ... i loved this stanza in ur poem
Fake smiles come easily
now that I've had practice
at school, at home, everywhere
I feel like I am plastic

good methaphor!
stay strong and take care always

great poem i love dit check out some of mine when you get a chance

-sabrina

hey, great poem :) i reallly hope things start working out for you soon

Always with love, Lmay xXx

gooooood xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

yes indeed writing is an excellent release good job take care