Comments : Little daisy, in a lake of lilies...

  • 14 years ago

    by David Paul

    This is one of the most unique poems I've read. No one elses that I've read has writen about helping the anorexic (sorry if I can't spell) Its a good poem and for sure your getting a 5 from me on it. keep up the good work.

  • 14 years ago

    by Alex

    This poem is so different from any other poem i have read on this site. It is amazing. well done. 5/5 keep up writing. You have a talent for it.
    ~@L€X~

  • 14 years ago

    by katie!

    That was so beautiful, I really liked it, I understand your point I'm not anorexic or bullimic but I have binge eating/ compulsive overeating disorder :( well done :)

  • 14 years ago

    by hussain

    once i read ur end note it did make more sense. the poem was different to other poem as this one kinda had a hidden message one that will take alot of thought and different people will interpretate it in different ways. i liked the poem its simple and unique.

    take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    I read this differently, like beauty doesn't matter because in time it'll fade and we all die. But I like the way it's open to people's own interpretations, very unique. Well done.

    Take good care of yourself.
    All my love,
    Laura.

  • 14 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Amazing! the metaphor is very creative and the title just lures you in, great piece , I read it once upon a time, just never commented lol, 5

    Love Always
    Heather

  • 14 years ago

    by Gemmie Lou

    really liked it well done xxx

  • 14 years ago

    by noworries2

    you did good at portraying your idea. that is awesome i'm not that creative to do something like this.

  • 14 years ago

    by natalie

    hey that didnt suck, it was reely gud :) and i think it makes a lot of sense, :) xx

  • 14 years ago

    by shannon

    wow...this definetly does not suck...amazing is what it was.. beautiful. i loved how you put it

  • 14 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    Another great poem. AMazing it was a unique poem that I ever read. I really enjoyed reading it. It was well written and the flows just blends very well. Great work!!!5/5 =)

    Can u plz commentt on my new Poem titled My story Part II thanks!!!=)

  • 14 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    I wasn't thinking about people being sick when i read it, but I understand what you meant and how you were thinking. It's just that a different picture came to my mind when I read it, because i was thinking of people being beautiful when they're young and as their beauty fades when they grow older people forget about them. Very good poem.
    Satuxxa

  • 14 years ago

    by Amanda

    It was really good to read and i enjoyed it so much that i am going to read it again! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by *liZ*

    maybe i didnt want it that way

  • 14 years ago

    by Frankie

    I think you speak your opinions very poetically. keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    Different, but it was good, thanks for the explination tho!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Prince Enigma

    Good poem!!!