This is one of the most unique poems I've read. No one elses that I've read has writen about helping the anorexic (sorry if I can't spell) Its a good poem and for sure your getting a 5 from me on it. keep up the good work.
once i read ur end note it did make more sense. the poem was different to other poem as this one kinda had a hidden message one that will take alot of thought and different people will interpretate it in different ways. i liked the poem its simple and unique.
I wasn't thinking about people being sick when i read it, but I understand what you meant and how you were thinking. It's just that a different picture came to my mind when I read it, because i was thinking of people being beautiful when they're young and as their beauty fades when they grow older people forget about them. Very good poem.