This is one of the most unique poems I've read. No one elses that I've read has writen about helping the anorexic (sorry if I can't spell) Its a good poem and for sure your getting a 5 from me on it. keep up the good work.

This poem is so different from any other poem i have read on this site. It is amazing. well done. 5/5 keep up writing. You have a talent for it.
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That was so beautiful, I really liked it, I understand your point I'm not anorexic or bullimic but I have binge eating/ compulsive overeating disorder :( well done :)

once i read ur end note it did make more sense. the poem was different to other poem as this one kinda had a hidden message one that will take alot of thought and different people will interpretate it in different ways. i liked the poem its simple and unique.

take care

I read this differently, like beauty doesn't matter because in time it'll fade and we all die. But I like the way it's open to people's own interpretations, very unique. Well done.

Take good care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

Amazing! the metaphor is very creative and the title just lures you in, great piece , I read it once upon a time, just never commented lol, 5

Love Always
Heather

really liked it well done xxx

you did good at portraying your idea. that is awesome i'm not that creative to do something like this.

hey that didnt suck, it was reely gud :) and i think it makes a lot of sense, :) xx

wow...this definetly does not suck...amazing is what it was.. beautiful. i loved how you put it

Another great poem. AMazing it was a unique poem that I ever read. I really enjoyed reading it. It was well written and the flows just blends very well. Great work!!!5/5 =)

Can u plz commentt on my new Poem titled My story Part II thanks!!!=)

I wasn't thinking about people being sick when i read it, but I understand what you meant and how you were thinking. It's just that a different picture came to my mind when I read it, because i was thinking of people being beautiful when they're young and as their beauty fades when they grow older people forget about them. Very good poem.
Satuxxa

It was really good to read and i enjoyed it so much that i am going to read it again! :)

maybe i didnt want it that way

I think you speak your opinions very poetically. keep it up!

Different, but it was good, thanks for the explination tho!!

Good poem!!!