Wow, that was a really great poem, well done, keep up the great work :)

Love it! Really great...full of emotion
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in line 4, try thousandth* but other than that, a beautifully sad poem, with lots of emotion and a gorgeous message! =) keep it up Jacklyn, and I'm sorry for the loss if it's a true story
5/5

Love you
Heather

Well written as always. Brought a tear to my eye. All the love.

Take care girl <3 Have a neat spring break.
Luv Yaz,
;;--Kalah.

Wow, this is a very moving poem, excellent:)xxx