awww, dear i feel so bad for you.
i share those same feelings and memories as you do but i cant stand thinking of such things happening to you. .....i pray for you all the time and i wont stop, i want your pain to end but not that way. <3 5/5
loving and missing you -Allen
I'm so sorry about all the pain you must go through. I truly am. But, hunny.. it's not worth contemplating death over! God has a plan for your life, and whether or not you can see or feel him.. HE IS THERE FOR YOU!!! <3 And so am I! :-)
This is not your best work but not your worst either. I think that your taking a lot of your anger out on poems and i know that is how you probably deal with it. I think that your really wonderful poet when you want to be. I think this poem sort of gives the reader a little insight into what you truely are....an amazing person.
I am glad that my comment/ open for conversation has helped you abit and eased your pain.
Forget about everything when you right and just right what you feel is in your heart. If it is anger and dispair then write about that.
4/5 to be honest.
Dark Savior Aka Shaun.
P.S. thanks for the comments on my poems, i really appreciate them, that chat invite is always open if you ever want an ear to listen to you. Good Job.
14 years ago
great poem! i love it! really amazing. . . sad but i can relate. . . wow now that is sad lol. . . well like you said we need to stay strong. . . keep it up!
Omg I sure hope you never commit suicide because I know I would miss you! I love your writing, your one of my favorite poets and it would be horrible if I never got to read your work again. You have such a talent just look at what's around you. You can accomplish so much more. Of course this poem is amazing as are you. Always here. >3jess
andrea.. i could never hate ur poem..it has always been great.. luv it.. so meaningful.. keep writing, it'll keep you alive.. i've put down my pen for quite a while but im feeling down too.. myb i'll keep writing.. ur poem inspired me, ur such a great poet~