put a tear in my eye!! i really enjoyed this and love it. you have very interesting poems... 5

Thanks honey that's a lovely thing to say xx

Another sad poem! As always a great poem! I love all your poems! Brooke

If you want check out my newest ones I don't know if you have read them or not! Thanx and Take Care!

you have some real good choice of words but your style is still choppy. I like your work it just doesn't flow. Read Set Free and hold me and tell me what you think.

I have to agree with Robert, the style is a bit choppy. Work on that. But, I also have to say I truly liked this poem, it's a pleasure reading your poems. Keep writing, take care.
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