Comments : When I First Layed Eyes On You...

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Aww what a sweet dedication!

    Good luck to you 2!

    Love Always,
    Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent write, david.
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Great poem, its so sweet