omg, I loved this to no end. This was incredible... Great work!!
Car

damn boy... i.. don't know wut to say. it was a gorgeous poem but it's all so sad. wut happened to my happy zacky grapeness!

Oh hun...this is amazing. but SO sad. Please hold tight Zac...this is SO good....I know you can keep going....you just have to keep your head up. Let me know if you need anything, okay?!
Love always
Sammy

Oh Zac...I wish that you didn't have to do that...it hurts so much that you are in pain...
Katie

aww great poem...really sad tho. keep up the great work!

*jenny*

btw..u should send a poem 2 the poetry contest at skool.

So many sad poems. So many different words you use to describe your pains. If it weren't for those, I wonder sometimes if its even possible for a person to feel that deep. But standards never held anything against you.