wow...another 5/5

I really like this poem.. 5 stars for this one ***** =) Please check out my poems "I wanted everything" and "The Model On Page 10" please comment/rate.. thanks a lot.. hugs

breathtaking poem..i really like it.

sorry to point this out but ; in the 2nd verse ,

Buy my again ,< --- my meant to be ''Buy me' again ''

Also, (5th verse/ stanza)

Open your wings to the endless blue
Where sky and see have fallen in love

i think you meant ... sky and sea instead of sky and see.

just thought i point that out, it was a wonderful poem, great job! :)

I loved this one!!! Once again it was very interesting and beautiful, it had a sense of such sadness and pain.... I though it was AmAzInG!! I'd give it more then a 5 if i could:)

wow, GREAT poem. I would give it a 100/5 if I could.

wow, I'm amazed. That's terrific. ~great job~

-no more

Goodness, from the beginning onward, your writing took me to another world. The blue water and ocean breeze makes me feel like im in a completely differnt place, away from home. Enchanting...
~Hina

ahh u ARE AMAZING...seriously wickedly good stuff uve got here..i'm loving it..

Beautiful imagery and brilliant word usage.

Again good description and emotion has been used.

Keep Writing
Nici

Wow, i don't know what it is about this poem, but i love it so much. it gets you thinking.