yet another amazing poem..continue o write

Very good poem! I voted a 5! keep it up.. hugs

another great poem, i really enjoyed reading this one! poem flowed well and i lov this part;

Believe in me once more
And I may find a reason
To move on
Cause I am not the one
I used to be
I had to change
To chase my dream
My ragged dream,
My final fall

i loved that verse, it was amazing.

Truly poetry form a greek goddess...Great job!

Truly poetry fr0m a greek goddess...Great job!
<~HIna

Nicely done..loved it alot.
It makes me think deeper...
Good job!
All the best to you!
;-)

hey your poem was beautifully written and put together in a way i can't describe! i loved it! :)

Again, just awesome, just awesome

Simply exquisite, reminds me of something I read by Nathaniel Hawthorne not long ago.

Really good poem, I liked it sooo much.
Great job, keep it up! *hugs*
Check out mine when you have time, thx.

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

Incredible journey of words, possibly lyrics. Very impressive Ria. Your abiltiy to draw from within is great and to consume the world around you, even greater.

Another beauty, well done, gosh I keep reading the most amazing poems today, how do you do it? Jus every line you write seems to fit in so perfectly, wow, well done

The changing of line numbers in each stanza works well for this poem and it's topic. The emotion remains throughout.

Keep Writing
Nici

*eyes open and jaw drops* omg. Thats deep. hmm. wow. idk what to say really. wow. 5/5. wow. kilman = David B.

Excellent poem. Thanx a lot for commenting on my poems:) It helps!
Always,
Line

i can just say it was a really GREAT
poem. Love, Marjan

thats sad... i hope youll be ok... 5/5

Your poems are very amazing. There ae no words to tell you how impressed I really am.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Loved the last stanza, it sums up the whole poem. keep it up and you will go far in life with your work.
Juls