very good. keep it up. great job.

Reticent Soul *cool*

A well written picture of emotions
we all go though in our lifetime.

Silent Spirit, you know you cannot keep
pretending forever behind self locked walls.
The dark pretends too be your friend
and makes you think you are weak.
Weed out the good from the bad.
Let the light shine on your unique frame,
leave the dark in the box and step out
into the spot light were you belong my friend.

Heather, your writing skills have become
more extraordinary one write after the other.
Keep on writing like that girl and thank you
for sharing.

hey this poem rocks, great work. i love how you made an image in my mind. it really creates that in my mind. awsome job. hope your aite? Much luv

Nick

awesome job heather! i really loved this. it was short and awesome~ keep it up~ i enjoy reading your poems~
love ya~
*Brittany*

flawless flow honest and thougt provoking emotion great job

nice poem, 5 minutes? you must be overwhelmed with thoughts? Bursting with creativity

Great one!..^_^ loved it!

Chris

Wow...Heather I loved that!! Very nice write!!! 5/5

hey great poem people really do build walls like this inside thier heart.

“Even when it seems like nobody cares,
someone always does,
you just have to reach out,
and they'll catch your fall,
just the only hard part,
is finding out who they are!” <--- i'm hear for your

“Trying to fix my heart,
it's all broke up,
turned everyone away,
which is why it's still broken today,” <-- you will still need to love in life, just don't block to many people out.

it sounds like your going through something rought just keep your chin up, hopefully i can help some.

~PLP~ Lil slam~ hugs and love!

Wonderful piece! Loved the honesty! Flowed beautifully! Keep it up~Holly

Nice write, beautifully done.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Excellent job as always. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*