wow, this one was awesome! 5/5

great work...... you are heaps talented once again alot of emotions came across very strong emotions loved it

I voted a 5 for this one =) very well-written.. good job.. hugs from september spring

Hayley,
Fantastic writing if you would like,add me write to me some time x_ima_fake_x@hotmail.com. I would be glad to hear more from you