Happy Birthday to You

i think this is good. different but good

i love this poem

aint bad.. havent herd one like this before. good...interesting also.. dont no what else to say right now. let me think of something. but 5!!

keep going honey - i liked it xx

Hey you guys...I am new. I am not much of a poem writer. I try though. I LOVE poetry. If I could get pointers it would be great. This actually happened. My birthday was Friday April 8, and well the guy I liked came over and it happened under the stars *sigh* Sorry I am a hopeless romantic too....probably why I like poetry so much. But please be critical. I would love to become a better poem writer. Thanks everyone