its a good poem hunni, full of feeling xxxxx 5/5

its a good poem hunni, full of feeling xxxxx 5/5

Amanda, what can I say?? Don't do that to yourself, never again....I know you have done it before!!! But I can't tell your how stupid it is, cause i do it myself!! I'm glad that you realized that this isn't the way out.... Please think positive and keep your head up!!! I'm here for you....

*Love Sabrina*

i loved it! amazing...a 5/5

I really liked this but I could tell it was rushed... But sometimes the best poems need to be... great work...Sherrie

It was really a great poem. It was awesome. The poem was well written and it flows very well. You really did a great job. Great work!!!=) 5/5

Could u plz read my new poem titled My Story PArt II thanks!!=)

Alot of feeling went into this one. Very well done. I loved it!!!!!! 5/5

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

alot of emotion was displayed in this one. lucky you have jade there for you. Sad poem but really well written. Keep writing!

Amanda, Full of emotion and a sad write. Glad you realized you don't want this to happen again. Great job, well done. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

wow that was wonderful. keep it up. good job

"I just wrote this poem because i did something really silly to myself this morning and i am just glad i realized that it wasn't a good thing to do. I will never do it again." I have to say, this was my favorite line.

really good and l love the way its so smooth...5/5

Not rubbish at all!!! I actually Cringed when you wrote
"I started to cry then got my nails without thinking, scratched right down my arm without even blinking, The blood was pouring and my arm was so very hot,"
So much Raw emotion.. I loved it!!!

You must be high if you think this is rubbish!! Look I been reading alot around here and this poem had everything you wanted to really call it good. Props to you for doing so well I gave this a 5 good job