This is probably one of my best .
hope u all like it
:D

please write comments evry 1 , lol

they r well appreciated

sarah xxxxxxxx

wow i like this one even better ... you are a good writer really nice, really really nice, and i know how you feel about that guy grrr they make you so mad sometimes ..... :) smile make you feel better!

You need to delete the spaces at the end. just a bit of advice. the poem itself was excellent. it really made me think.

5/5 David