Honey,
I know I can't spell. I don't even come close in most cases so the spell check don't pick it up. And if it did I have no clue which word out of the list to pick.

That was beautiful. I can't say anything i'm speechless. I loved the first lines espeicially, they're so romantic. You have a lot of talent, keep writing,
Satuxxa

I have day dreamed about a guy myself if I could be with him just once! But in my case it's a married man so I don't go there! You have been writing for awhile I hope I will improve with time. It seems like you were always good! Take Care! Brooke

Would you give me your opinion on my newest one Set Free it takes me days to w rite one poem and sometimes even longer. But I am trying! Thanx!

wow thats great too

lotta love~*MIKE*~

keep writing definitely! i absolutely loved this one...i know how that goes, and i think alot of people can relate to it also! thanx for sharing it!
:-) luvs always,
Ashli

Hi and thanks for ur help much apricieated