I Want You

by Timothy Bledsoe   Apr 12, 2005


I want to see your face,
gaze upon your beauty forever.

I want to hear your voice,
let it carry me to the stars.

I want to smell your scent,
become intoxicated by nothing but you.

I want to touch your body,
hold you, feel your warm embrace.

I want to taste your lips,
kiss you, savor the sweetest nectar.

I want to love you,
show you the meaning of the word.

I want you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I really like this...My boyfriend lives in Arizona so, I can relate, even if that is not what you meant. You wrote this in a way so that many can relate!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    another good one...although the ending could be tweaked a lil bit...but that's just me...otherwise good word choice, you have such brilliant ways of comparing two things! nice job! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    meh, you can do better. 4/5 the end "i want you" just doesnt seem to fit properly its missing..something.
    ~Freak~

  • 19 years ago

    by *YaSmIn*

    omg i loved it!!!ur soo goood.....i wish i actually knew u..lol...man i wish i someone wrote me poems like that...*5/5*def.!!!
    ~*~yasmin~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    very, very amazing. this is definitely a 5/5. If I could, I would rate it a 100/5.

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