You forgot to say "please" but I'll comment anyhow...great job with the poem...only thing is I'm hoping it's not about yourself. As you probably know, drinking is only a temporary depressant...and when sober all the troubles are back...more troubles even.

It had a nice flow and everything...

xxx

Again this is another of your poems that is soooo full of emotion and is really heart wrenching. I hope that if it is based on true feelings that you are ok. Do you mind if i add you to my favourites because I love all your poetry.
Lots of love Kate x~X~x

That was awesome man! I really like it!

Hey there, I liked this poem, it's different. And thanks for the tips on mine. =)
-Ally