amazing work...you create the feeling of it just all falling apart...everything is changing...losing heart and faith...I can relate...I love the poem.

xxx

i absolutley love this. you have a skill at writing. i'm adding you to my favourites. well done!

<3 Andriana

This poem...I can't describe the way it just speaks to your soul... I have seen many poems like this, but by far yours is my favorite! Keep writing!

Forever chaotic,
The Fire Eyed Demoness

wow i really liked this one...can totally relate lol anyways great job 5/5 keep it up...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Ohh, Deep, Very deep & mysterious to me in a way, I am that girl, I dont wanna be that girl but I am, wow very well done, deep