Comments : Broken Friendship

  • 19 years ago

    by girlii797

    NICE!!! it hit me right in the heart.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Beautifull written. I loved the way it flowed and the message was divine. Broken friendship can be painful though. Excellent write my friend. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Excellent. Very nice flow, word choice, and message. Very well done.
    ~Faith of the Fallen

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    This was a great write...Nice rhyme, though Hold and Hand don't really rhyme...Nicely done, I'm sure that many can relate!

  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    oh very good, like u r watching from afar...
    i liked it, can't exactly realate, my girlfriends and i dont' really fight, but my of my best friendships w/ guys have tragic endings, my friendship wasn't good enough for them, they always pushed for more.
    still though, awesome poem,
    doesn't hold back any emotions,
    that would be ur bluntness, lol
    love u, miss u,
    never stop writing, i luv reading it
    hugs and kisses
    *rach*