Comments : Keep the misleading voices at bay

  • 16 years ago

    by ♥CRIMSONxX♥

    Another Great poem!
    You have a lot of talent!!
    xx Keep it up xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    wow excellent poem! Sorry ive not commented earlier but comps been messin up!!! brill poem with such emotion...espec liked the line ...deathly dreams sing through her mind...thought it was really great
    take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Toni

    Excellent, probably one of your best! The chorus-like change of rhythm worked so well. ooo maybe you could make it into a song?? Your imagery in your work just keeps on getting more and more imaginative..beautiful x

  • 15 years ago

    by Polly

    that's really powerful stuff, i havent read your poems in a while cos i aint been on this site recently but they are all just so consistently good. keep it up xXx