excellent poem! your emotions are just pouring through your writing, and you have written this so well. im sorry you feel this way though and i sure hope that you will feel better. =)

Wow...that was really good. It was full of a lot of emotion. Gave me a little tear! Lol...Im just a softy I guess. Lol. Good job!

Sorry to hear that your hurting. But this poem is excellent, i loved it,flowed beautifuly. emotions went beyond the words and the writing in the poem. very powerful and moving poem.

take care.

hope everything works out for you. So much pain and emotion there. Need to talk? or want to vent, just PM me, I've been there. XOXO
Robyn

I really liked ur poem. so full of emotion and feeling. wonderful job and keep it up :)

Ow~ I even felt the pain just reading it... are you ok? I hope so! This was beautiful, really amazing. Great write!
Car

i love it soo much! i related to the whole thing. man your talented keep writing!

GREAT POEM. I am in the same exact situation w/ my dad....but, you've done a wonderful job expressing. "like silent screaming, or careful bruising" was my favorite part. Anyway, great job!

5/5.

brilliant poem, the words flowed so well and i thought the qustions also worked well. keep it up!

stay strong always, lu -x-x-x-

ohhhh thats so sad...but I really liked it I could feel your pain...Xox Sherrie

if you cant love me? why cant i be dead?

I love that part. Great poem. I can tell there is a lot of pain behind it. Excellent job. Keep it up.
Check out some of mine if you can.

Love much,
Tiff

you could feel the emotion pouring out of this piece, it was soo amazing. I dont know how you did it.
Beautifully done.
5/5
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cate

That was an excellently written poem. The emotion was evident. You have great writing skills and much talent. Well done.

Awww Georgi pumpkin! This is so f'in sad! It nearly made me cry :( Im so so sooo sorry if you feel like that. Please try to cheer up! We cant have a meatball hoagie in so much pain can we?! :( I you ever need to talk remember im here for you!
Take care,
Rachelxxx

I hurt reading that, it was amazing... It flowed so well and was very moving and sad... I hope you everything works out for you and i'm here to listen if you need me..

wow, i just loved it. i could feel the things you you talked about in the poem. You have such talent, im am so jealous. GREAT WORK. 5/5

Very emotional! I loved the way you wrote it. So much feeling went into that poem - i can tell. Keep writing, you're good at it! :)

very good *~Georgi~*! I voted a 5 for this one! keep up the great work..

Great poem, or should I say awesome? i loved the whole idea of it and the words were perfect. Keep writing, take care.
Satuxxa

so sad but so good babe thanx for the comment u got talent and i really enjoyed reading ur stuff stay strong for me babe, and keep up the god writing i know what ur going through and i know its hard but hang in there cuz i need someone
always here to help (rosie posie*)