Hey There, cool poem. I liked it. When you get the chance, check out my new poem “When ever you need a hand”. PLz rate and comment.

You where always at my side
*Where should be WERE*
You where always around
*Again where should be WERE*

Nothing to hard to fix up hun besides that its a really great heartfelt poem I'm sure would have made your Mum smile - good work keep it up

=Eirisa=

Awww bless!! This is so sweet! Have you shown your mum? I wish I had that kinda relationship with my mum. But anyhow, well done xx

This is beautiful! 5/5
-J-