this is really good. very haunting.

I love the perspective. And I love how people will think your some masked murderer. =) 'Tis excellent.

I really enjoyed reading this one. I liked the way that it switched between people and how it incorperated both of them. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Great poem, dear!
However, the line
" Will be remembered from fright",
Shouldn't it be
"Will be remembered with fright"
To me it sounds better this way, just a suggestion though.

BTW, a very fine write. Love the innovative form and flow.