Mr.lover!

by JI STRING   Apr 16, 2005


Love was someone like no one else, love showed me what life was about
Love said,\\\"I shall catch the stars as it fly.\\\\\\\"
I was happy that day was a big surprise
The surprise did not end it flew back right from were I had began
Love told me he was finished and then on he just vanished
Trying so hard to find out why, why would love just threw me aside

\\\\\\\"MARCH.\\\\\\\"an other year came again, the friendly flowers talking to me like a good old friend
It howled to me as I pass, passing love once again
Love waved Hi and I waved in reply
When I pass love I try to smile, covering this pain I held all this mile
No matter how hard I try, try and try
Love would always make me cry, cry and cry
Now my tears sang, sang as loud as the church bell rang
Threw those feelings I have had, I would still want love so bad
Maybe one day love might come and say,\\\"Hi\\\",and \\\"Hi\\\" back I might reply
Or maybe one day love might come back me
For that day what would I say......?

(I had just edited please
comment , honestly please .LOL.)

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  • 19 years ago

    by Heather

    Its really good... keep it up.
    xoxo,
    Heather*