good poem...it was very expressive.

WOW! reat poem! It flowed really well too! ~5/5~

i can completely understand how you feel. love does hurt... it sucks... well, great job! keep it up!

your writing is good, and you apparently have the idea. you seem to sometimes just find rhyming words without putting deliberate meaning behind them, but overall, i think your writing has a lot of potential, and youre on your way to perfecting your art.

great poem, by the way.

I agree with tsekoden, It was good but not spectacular...I just felt like it missing something but good poems anyways i gave it 4

Wow seriously all your poems are about love or sadness. Why don't you write about something else? I mean there are so many things to write about in the world that why not pick another topic. To be honest, i'm getting tired of reading love poems and depressing or sad poems. How about a beautiful poem about nature? A sunset? Anything like that. Keep writing,
Satuxxa

I agree with tsekoden....Your poem needs something more....But great poem, just keep writing and try to make them a little longer!!! Just surgestiona, hope you don't get me wrong!!!

this is really good and i am so sorry you feel that way

wow this is a really great poem it sounds like me & the way i feel