Immortal Hate

by Rachel   Apr 16, 2005


Why should I even try,
When you're not even here for me.
Why should I try to be perfect,
When you don't even notice?
There's no chance in Hell,
That's I'll get you're attention any time soon.
I should just give up now,
Cut my wrists open
And bleed to death.
Put the gun to my head,
pull the trigger.
To tell you the truth,
the cold hard truth,
not even one knife
would kill all the hate that I have for you.
Not even one bullet,
would kill all the hate that I have for you.
So, I should just give up now, right?

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  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow, awesome poem. i loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    TeRRiFic job

  • 18 years ago

    by Alissa

    realllly powerful...loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by xfAdInGxaWaYx

    wow dats g8!

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle Riddle

    I liked this, good job, and thanx for the comment on my poem :)
    Much love
    ¤Danielle¤