Wow, the ending is quite so sad, summed it up so well. Nice write Holly, 5/5

Love ya
Heather
ps i'm so glad you are posting more!

Excellent! Is this based on a true story? I'm going to read part I now. Keep up the great poems!

Is this a true story?

areider@pbp.com

Awwwwww. Poor guy. This was one of the best poems I've read in a while. Superb, Holly:)